Cole’s Notes
A short film script by David Nicholson
EXT. LIBRARY - DAY
SARA, a young woman, is standing near the library steps strumming her guitar and
singing a song. A short distance from her, COLE sits on a park bench. He is
tapping his fingers nervously on the handrest and occasionally looks in her
direction. His eyes linger on her when he sees her looking the other way. He
takes a deep breath, stands, and walks towards her. She looks up and smiles as
he approaches. He smiles back and pauses for a moment before dropping a coin in
her open guitar case and walking away.
INT. APARTMENT - DAY
JEFF, a fellow student and Cole's roommate, leans his chair against the wall and
laughs at Cole, who is standing near the door with his jacket still on.
JEFF
I just don't get it. What the hell's so
difficult about just asking the girl out?
COLE
I don't know. I still know nothing about
her. Maybe she's got a boyfriend or
something.
JEFF
Aw gee, well maybe you should ask her.
COLE
I can't just do that. I just have to get
to know her a little better first.
JEFF
Oh yes, of course. So tell me, what
wonderful things did you two talk about
today?
COLE
Well, nothing really. But she does
recognize me now, she smiled when she saw
me.
JEFF
Well of course she bloody well smiled,
you're probably her best customer.
Exactly how much money have you spent on
this girl so far? It's like one of those
peek-a-boo theaters. You know, the ones
where you have to put the coins in the
slots so the shutters will open for a few
minutes and you can see the dancing lady.
COLE
Tomorrow will be better. I'll talk to her
tomorrow. I promise.
JEFF
Oh, so you're going to make this a daily
thing now? Are you certain you can afford
it? Maybe you can list her as an expense
on your student loan forms.
EXT - LIBRARY - DAY
Sara is singing once again and Cole is sitting in the same spot on the bench. He
is flipping through a paperback book but seems to be simply choosing pages at
random. Sara pauses in between songs and he gets up and approaches her. She
looks up from her guitar. There is a moment of awkward silence.
COLE
Hi.
SARA
Hello.
Cole smiles slightly, nods, and then walks away, silently cursing himself. Sara
stares after him in confusion.
INT. APARTMENT - DAY
JEFF
So, did you talk to her?
COLE
Yeah.
Jeff motions with his hand for Cole to continue, but Cole remains silent.
JEFF
And what did you say?
COLE
I said "hi."
Jeff throws up his hands in disgust.
JEFF
You really are hopeless. Do you want me
to ask her out for you? Is that it? Hell,
I'll ask her out for myself just to show
you how easy it is. Come on, what's the
worse that can happen, eh? She tells you
to get lost? Fine, no great loss. You just
make it worse by dragging it out so long.
Why does it have to be such a big deal?
COLE
Look, I know all that. But it doesn't
matter. I can use logic 'til it's coming
out my ears but it doesn't help the fact
that my heart is going a mile a minute
and my tongue has two left feet every
time I want to say anything to her.
JEFF
So what do you want to do, write her a
note?
COLE
Hey, that might be a good idea.
Jeff groans and smacks himself in the forehead with his hand.
JEFF
God, that would be just like you. The
girl's gonna call the police on you, you
know, she'll think you're stalking her or
something. Gonna include a photo with
that note so she knows who you are?
EXT. LIBRARY - DAY
Cole is sitting on the bench with a folded piece of paper in his hand. He stares
at the paper as he flips it over and over in his fingers. He stands up quickly,
dropping the note in his pocket, and runs right into Sara who had just been
approaching him.
COLE
Oh God, I'm so sorry.
SARA
No, that's all right, it was my fault.
Cole sees Sara bending down to pick up a folded piece of paper. She hands it to
him.
SARA
This must be yours.
COLE
Oh, no, it can't be. It must be for you
I think.
SARA
No, it's definitely not mine.
She quickly places the note in his hand and walks away. Cole lets out a
disgruntled groan and turns in the opposite direction. He flips the note over in
his hand for a moment and then tosses it into a garbage can.
INT. APARTMENT - DAY
JEFF
I told you the note was a stupid idea.
COLE
Well I still think it could've worked.
You can't get tongue-tied in a note.
JEFF
Look, I'll be your agent, okay. I'll
approach her and tell her all about you
and then we'll set up some grand meeting,
okay. Of course I will expect some sort
of commission.
Cole continues pacing, ignoring the sly grin Jeff gives him. He puts his hands
in his pockets and pulls out a folded piece of paper. He stares at it in
confusion and then a look of realization comes over his face. He drops the note
and runs out the door. Jeff just shakes his head as he watches Cole go.
JEFF
I will never understand that guy.
And there you are, my very first script to ever be filmed. What did you
think of it? I would love to hear any comments you might have. Just go to the contact page to drop me a line. If you would
like to hear the tragic tale of what happened when it was translated from
paper to film, check out Cole's Notes: The Movie!
Since my experience with filming it turned out so lousy, anyone else who
wants to try filming this thing is more than welcome to try it. Just let
me know how it turns out.